note This is not in any way related to Black Mesa or the half-life universe.
Hey everyone, I come to you today with a story I have been writing since the start of this year.
Feedback is a work of My Little Pony that deals with the topic of death and what happens when a close friend is taken away. The story deals with the demise of Twilight Sparkle in the aftermath of an encounter with an ancient evil. However, there’s a lot about her demise that doesn’t make sense and, as her friends figure out in the wake, things can only get worse from there.
There’s a fair bit of time travel involved with this story and it works with a lot of mechanics of the verse. If you enjoy works like Inception or Pheonix Wright, then you may enjoy this story as well.
You can find the story here. Be warned that it is currently in progress! That said, I do my very best to update weekly.